Focus Group (Draft 3)

We chose to show our third draft to a group of people, varying of ages and genders. We were looking for critical feedback, in order for us to edit and perfect our film, and achieve the best result we possibly can.

The group mainly commented negatively on the soundtrack, saying that it is very static and doesn't flow. We aim to successfully fix this, so that film flows and the soundtrack matches the action. Positive feedback was that they understood the narrative. When asked what could we do to improve, someone replied with "make a part two". This showed us that people were intrigued and wanted to see more.