Target Audience Feed Back (draft 1)

In order to achieve the best results, I recently set up a small focus group and asked them questions about our first draft. I asked for both negative and positive comments.

In conclusion, the group said our opening was "more like a trailer".
It was also said that we "ruin the end" because we give away too much "information".
The group understood the narrative and said that the story line was "confusing but interesting"
The group enjoyed the footage saying that "the low-key lighting was very effective, you get a cold and dark atmosphere".