SKITZ (second draft)

This is our second draft of our film opening. We have concluded that we need to add a more enticing soundtrack and fade out some of our dialogue and music into other scenes so that it isn't so jumpy. We have also decided that we should add some sound in on our last scene as it isn't very interesting. We feel that we should also try to fix the film so that it flows better. We also said that we should also build up the office scene so that the confusion is clearly conveyed.